Sindangsari Wonderful Dormitory

Outline

• Paragraph 1
• Introduction to Sindangsari dormitory.
• Paragraph 2
• Dormitory's facilities and services.
• Paragraph 3
• Dormitory payments and student benefits.
• Conclusion
• Sindangsari dormitory has excellent facilities and services so that students are comfortable and happy living in the dormitory. In addition, its 24/7 guard makes students feel safe.

Paragraph 1

• Main idea
• Mostly, to achieve the best outcome, more struggle is needed.
• Major 
• Leaving the beloved home and being far away from the family are common phases that are experienced by an individual when they are growing up.
• Minor
• One of those phases is related to the matter of education.

Paragraph 2 

• Main Idea
• The name of dormitory and the facilities of dormitory.
• Major
• The dormitory's name and  the facilities of girls dormitory.
• Minor
• Being known for the name of "Asrama Sindangsari", just like the other dormitories, the dormitories for boys and girls are separated. The building of girl dormitory that is tall stands with the height of 5 stories, and it is located exactly in front of the boy dormitory that also stands tall and strong like the girl dormitory. Entering the building, there is a cafetaria where the students can provide their food needs. On the corner of the dormitory, there are 10 rooms on each floor with the size of 4x5 meters. There are also some fantastic facilities. Every room is facilitated with 4 beds, 4 study tables, 2 fans, 2 closets, and 2 bed rooms. Not forget to mention, the quality of the service given by the cleaning staff is amazing. They always clean each part of the dormitory regularly so that the cleanliness can be maintained. In addition, there is enough air circulation since the window is very wide, and beautiful sceneries are ready to greet the eyes.
• Conclusion
• Sindangsari has good and complete facilities

Paragraph 3 

• Main Idea
• This paragraph tells about the advantage and the price of sindangsari dormitory.
• Major
• Sindangsari dormitory has a lot of advantages with low price.
• Minor
• The students of Untirta feel comfortable and enjoy in sindangsari dormitory.
• Conclusion
•  Sindangsari dormitory has a suitable price or worth it with all of the facilities that have been given by the Ubis.

FIRST DRAFT

Leaving the beloved home and being far away from the family are common phases that are experienced by an individual when they are growing up. One of those phases is related to the matter of education. Mostly, to achieve the best outcome, more struggle is needed. There are many of us who have to leave our home to go out of town under the aim of continuing our dream education. It is happening when we are about to enter university. Sometimes, several universities provide dormitories for their students with some terms and conditions, but there are also many of students who choose to live in their own chosen boarding houses or in their relatives' houses. One of the universities providing dormitories that is a quite phenomenal lately is Sultan Ageng Tirtayasa University, that is famous for its slogan called "Jawara."

Being known for the name of "Asrama Sindangsari", just like the other dormitories, the dormitories for boys and girls are separated. The building of girl dormitory that is tall stands with the height of 5 stories, and it is located exactly in front of the boy dormitory that also stands tall and strong like the girl dormitory. Entering the building, there is a cafetaria where the students can provide their food needs. On the corner of the dormitory, there are 10 rooms on each floor with the size of 4x5 meters. There are also some fantastic facilities. Every room is facilitated with 4 beds, 4 study tables, 2 fans, 2 closets, and 2 bed rooms. Not forget to mention, the quality of the service given by the cleaning staff is amazing. They always clean each part of the dormitory regularly so that the cleanliness can be maintained. In addition, there is enough air circulation since the window is very wide, and beautiful sceneries are ready to greet the eyes.

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With the fantastic facilities provided by Asrama Sindangsari, every student only needs to spend about 500 thousand rupiahs per month under the circumstance of the room being used by 4 people. There are also electric bicycles that can be used freely to help the transportation while the students are at the dormitory. The easy access to toilets, sufficient bedroom facilities, and various interesting offers make it comfortable for students to live in the dormitory. The bad impression of a dormitory will disappear by the time you have taken a look at Asrama Sindangsari, both for girls and for boys. Parents who are worried about the lives of youth out there will change their perspectives because the security of the place is excellent. The security guard is there 24/7, and he makes sure that the dormitory is all safe. Being a part of Asrama Sindangsari and feeling the bad and happy moments of living in a dormitory will remind us of family. Wherever we live, whatever the conditions are, if we are able to adapt, the place will be the most comfortable place in the world. It is because everything comes from ourselves.

FINAL DRAFT

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