Hai kawan-kawan, kali ini saya ingin membagi cerita saat memutuskan untuk menuntut ilmu jauh dari orang tua, atau biasa akrab kita menyebutnya sekolah di asrama. Cerita yang saya unggah ini cerita nyata yang benar-benar terjadi, namun sebenarnya lebih mengarah pada susunan paragraf essai. Akan tetapi, dalam bahasa Inggris. Karya essai ini sudah dikoreksi oleh Lecturer Mr. Scheel,jadi jangan khawatir apakah ini sudah memenuhi syarat atau belum.
Sebelumnya kawan-kawan harus mengetahui terlebih dahulu bagian-bagian dari essai, yaitu :
- Introduction - The first paragraph of an essay containing the Hook, the thesis, and the Leads.
- Middle Paragraph - the 'body' paragraph, the paragraph that the essay is explained, details are introduced, and examples are given.
- conclusion - the final paragraph of an essay
My father is the best motivator in my life. When I found out, I could go to Boarding School, my dad said, 'Going abroad is the best way to be successful because you can be confident''. This advice always stayed with me. Coming to Boarding School changed my life. First, leaving home was hard because I am an only child. Second, living here away from my family is difficult. Third, being a part of Manta Ray House helped me to adjust.
My Wishes changed my life. I hope can be a success in the future. I should have sacrifices be achieving it, like a go abroad. Make sure myself to live far from my parents. I do not have sister or brother, so my home will feel quiet without me. My friends in my junior high school gathered in the same school, make me envy with them. I'm comfortable with my safety zone. I do not want it should leave-taking from my parents.
I think living in here is very hard. "Dormitory is Scary", my cousin always said like that. I should meet with spooky senior. But this is made me socialize. I should be independent, like washing my own clothes. Usually, in my home, my mother always washed my clothes. I also iron my own clothes. Not only dormitory work, I also have many tasks from my teacher and about my PEARSON WEB, always made me be confuse. Almost every night, I should sleep late, cause my Portal PEARSON have much practice. It's made me wake up late
I got a new family in here, all boarding school student, especially my roommates. They always with me when I have a problem. I'm not feet homesick during I'm living in here because I have sisters or brothers in here. I also have a family from my room. Every day, me, Ami, Febby and Desinta cleaning the room together. We always got a good score in Room Checking. This is maybe can make me be happy, but I'm beginning unhappy since my PEARSON ( American Online Course ) have a problem. I always got a bad score. English speaking also made me be confused too. I'm not confident when I talk with my friend or with my teacher.
I have tried to be grateful for everything. I am convinced that dorm life story will be a lesson for me. I believe I can be a sociable young. I will make my parents be proud of me. I should be always happy because I have Manta ray house, my big reason made me smile every day. I hope I can meet with my mother as soon as possible.
Nah, itu tadi adalah secuil gambaran dari essai dalam bahasa Inggris. Akan tetapi, namanya manusia pastinya tidak luput dari kesalahan, maka dari itu saya juga masih membutuhkan masukan dari kawan-kawan. Kita semua sama-sama masih belajar for the best, not the perfect one. Jikalau kawan-kawan menginginkan penjelasan yang lebih rinci, dipersilahkan untuk berkomentar di bawah ini atau pergi ke blogspot saya.